Story Notes:
My first story. It's supposed to be a story which revolves around the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon game. The current chapters aren't exactly my best work, though I believe I am slowly improving them and getting better. My newer stories and chapters after the first ten of this story should hopefully be better.
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Transformation (3215 words)
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Official Beginning (2497 words) [Reviews: 1]
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A Tour and Requests (3891 words) [Reviews: 1]
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Nerves of Steel (5463 words)
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An Awestruck Team (4730 words)
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Another Day of Requests (4405 words)
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An Evil Rescue Team (4813 words) [Reviews: 1]
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A Contest Between Teams (8644 words) [Reviews: 1]
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Awakening of a Legend (8922 words) [Reviews: 1]
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Taking on a Legend (7991 words) [Reviews: 2]
Date:Apr 15 2015 Chapter:Official Beginning
This is just like the game. It's really good. I wish you would change your mind and continue the story. Laterz.
Date:Apr 15 2015 Chapter:A Tour and Requests
Well I never got to read the original so I can't comment on it, but if it was like it was in the game, I don't see what the problem was. Oh well maybe they wanted a sex shop instead of a place to remember forgotten moves. Onto the next chapter.
Date:Apr 18 2015 Chapter:An Evil Rescue Team
I'm very sorry that you decided not to continue this story as it great so far, and it also follows to game too. I hope one day soon you change your mind and continue it. Well onwards to the next chapter.
Date:Apr 19 2015 Chapter:A Contest Between Teams
So he has a great team and defeated Team Meanies. Great. Daniel should talk to Stephanie before things get too weird between them. Onwards to the next chapter.
Date:Apr 19 2015 Chapter:Awakening of a Legend
So Stephanie's feelings is revealed. I hope they hook up in the last chapter and I also hope you change your mind and continue the story as it is really great. To the last chapter I guess. ;(
Date:Apr 21 2015 Chapter:Taking on a Legend
So Daniel and Stephanie aren't given the chance to make up and be good friends and maybe more, we don't get to see Xatu, and we don't get to find out what Alakazam and his team is worried about, but you are going to end the story on a hanging note that doesn't happen? You are a great writer and a few years has passed since you posted this story. I am sure you can write a great ending for this story. Please finish it or at least add another chapter to it please.
Date:Apr 21 2015 Chapter:Taking on a Legend
There is also a lot of great things in the description that I would have love to read that didn't get to see the light of day. Could you please change you mind and continue it or let someone continue it on your behalf please.