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The Prince of Ghosts by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 1]

Summary:

Vecransyh and his best friend Kazamaru are two Pokemon trainers just starting out but neither of them could have predicted the road ahead of them...
(reviews are appreciated)Chapters one and two are very poorly written but trust me when i say the writing gets much better starting in chapter three and continues improving throughout the story
Tags: Shaymin Latios Latias Mew Arcanine Swampert Froslass Mismagius Aggron Lucario Luxray Floatzel

Story Notes:

Disclaimer: I do not own pokemon

  1. The Beginning (4683 words) [Reviews: 1]

  2. Cerulean City (2819 words)

  3. Reunion (3694 words)

  4. Victory Road (3472 words)

  5. The Battle Begins (3674 words)

  6. End of Round One (3607 words)

  7. Vec Vs. Jyro (3428 words)

  8. Third Place (3563 words)

  9. A Day Off. (3246 words)

  10. Final Battle (3588 words)

  11. The Award Ceremony (3203 words)

  12. Another Day Off (3381 words)

  13. Final Battle Decided (3906 words)

  14. A Duel Of Masters (3653 words)

  15. Onward to Sinnoh! (3805 words)

  16. Stratos (3794 words)

  17. Nightmare (3412 words)

  18. The First Badge (3670 words)

  19. The Princess of Ice (3763 words)

  20. Froslass' Lament (4166 words)

  21. What's in a name? (3549 words)

  22. A New Threat (3421 words)

  23. Ren and Roze (3513 words)

  24. A Dream Made Real (6935 words)

  25. Man in the Moon (3796 words)

  26. Reliving the Past (4998 words)

  27. Veilstone Gym (3577 words)

  28. Chapter 28 (3577 words)

  29. Crasher Wake (3179 words)

  30. A Figure and a Sword (3961 words)

  31. Family Ties (3651 words)

  32. The Will of Steel (3140 words)

  33. Rememberance (3140 words)

  34. Confusion (4221 words)

  35. Snowpoint (3400 words)

  36. Happy Birthday (3363 words)

  37. Neptune (3209 words)

  38. The Last Days (3161 words)

  39. Neptune Vs. Stratos (4223 words)

  40. Night Assassin (3837 words)

  41. Arrival (2849 words)

  42. The Fourth Legend (3361 words)

  43. Battle Royal (3945 words)

  44. 8 Months (3488 words)

  45. Escaping Distortion (4143 words)

  46. Time Well Spent (2660 words)

  47. Together Again (3631 words)

  48. The Other Side (3343 words)

  49. Spirit Duel (3696 words)

  50. Final Trial (3724 words)

  51. Wondertomb (3789 words)

  52. A strange encounter (3780 words)

  53. Opening Ceremony (3452 words)

  54. Round 1 Part 1 (3775 words)

  55. Round 1 Part 2 (5211 words)

  56. Round 1 Part 3 (4511 words)

  57. Round 2 Part 1 (3735 words)

  58. Round 2 Part 2 (2901 words)

  59. Round 2 Part 3 (1751 words)

  60. Round 3 Part 1 (4370 words)

  61. Round 3 Part 2 (2942 words)

  62. Round 4 (6611 words)

  63. Round 5 (7426 words)

  64. Round 6 (6426 words)

  65. S V K (3719 words)

  66. The Moon and the Stars (4232 words)

  67. Galactic Blockade (3542 words)

  68. Armageddon (3550 words)

  69. The Chosen Path (2244 words)

  70. A Safe Haven (10324 words)

  71. Chapter 71 Finding a Friend (4207 words)

  72. Reunited (4489 words)

  73. Riketz's Training (4341 words)

  74. Maiden of darkness (3950 words)

  75. AOTU (3298 words)

  76. The Plan (4329 words)

  77. The Last Day (3282 words)

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    Reviewer: kolofox
    Date:Sep 13 2014 Chapter:The Beginning
    This has an okay concept and I wouldn't mind if you came back to redo this because this needs a lot of work. first fix your dialogue I can hardly tell who is speaking, Second get rid of the swords and ridiculous powers, they are pokemon they don't need swords and try to keep the powers cannon to the games at least. Third use a better excuse than "it doesn't matter," when a steel type gets poisoned. Fourth when you create a destiny bound character like stratos and you kill him off give his death meaning and respect, When he died it felt like you truly hated him to give him such a bad death. Fifth battle with griatina... Fix it that's all I can say. sixth my god you have some boring battles, useful tip if they are not relitive to the story don't have them. also don't repeat yourself with Vancrish constantly sacrificing himself for his mate, and the whole plot hole thing of he forgot her pokeball....

    okay i managed to work up my ire so I wouldn't mind a rework of this story but keep it simple, too many protags muddy the actual story.